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| author | Zac Dover <zac.dover@proton.me> | 2024-12-04 03:13:05 +0100 |
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| committer | Zac Dover <zac.dover@proton.me> | 2024-12-04 03:13:05 +0100 |
| commit | 97df4479d90b7f1b659b71ac172ff1094d58a50e (patch) | |
| tree | de1945eebd5fe5242069ff84b906f5700c350200 /doc | |
| parent | Merge pull request #60917 from zdover23/wip-doc-2024-12-03-rados-ops-health-c... (diff) | |
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doc/rados: fix sentences in health-checks (3 of x)
Make sentences agree at the head of each section in
doc/rados/operations/health-checks.rst. The sentences were sometimes in
the imperative mood and sometimes in the declarative mood.
This commit edits the second third of
doc/rados/operations/health-checks.rst.
Note to (I hope soon) future Zac: There are a a couple of places near
the end of this file where the sentences are ungrammatical. Update these
in a separate PR (in isolation, so that the grammar and technical
accuracy of these sentences can be the primary focus of the reviewers).
Zac: cf. 000228
Signed-off-by: Zac Dover <zac.dover@proton.me>
Diffstat (limited to 'doc')
| -rw-r--r-- | doc/rados/operations/health-checks.rst | 23 |
1 files changed, 13 insertions, 10 deletions
diff --git a/doc/rados/operations/health-checks.rst b/doc/rados/operations/health-checks.rst index e3a31490cc7..c2da1957d80 100644 --- a/doc/rados/operations/health-checks.rst +++ b/doc/rados/operations/health-checks.rst @@ -1428,8 +1428,8 @@ resolution, see :ref:`storage-capacity` and :ref:`no-free-drive-space`. OBJECT_MISPLACED ________________ -One or more objects in the cluster are not stored on the node that CRUSH would -prefer that they be stored on. This alert is an indication that data migration +One or more objects in the cluster are not stored on the node that CRUSH +prefers that they be stored on. This alert is an indication that data migration due to a recent cluster change has not yet completed. Misplaced data is not a dangerous condition in and of itself; data consistency @@ -1628,9 +1628,10 @@ Stretch Mode INCORRECT_NUM_BUCKETS_STRETCH_MODE __________________________________ -Stretch mode currently only support 2 dividing buckets with OSDs, this warning suggests -that the number of dividing buckets is not equal to 2 after stretch mode is enabled. -You can expect unpredictable failures and MON assertions until the condition is fixed. +Stretch mode currently only support 2 dividing buckets with OSDs, this warning +suggests that the number of dividing buckets is not equal to 2 after stretch +mode is enabled. You can expect unpredictable failures and MON assertions +until the condition is fixed. We encourage you to fix this by removing additional dividing buckets or bump the number of dividing buckets to 2. @@ -1653,17 +1654,19 @@ NVMeoF Gateway NVMEOF_SINGLE_GATEWAY _____________________ -One of the gateway group has only one gateway. This is not ideal because it makes -high availability (HA) impossible with a single gatway in a group. This can lead to -problems with failover and failback operations for the NVMeoF gateway. +One of the gateway group has only one gateway. This is not ideal because it +makes high availability (HA) impossible with a single gatway in a group. This +can lead to problems with failover and failback operations for the NVMeoF +gateway. It's recommended to have multiple NVMeoF gateways in a group. NVMEOF_GATEWAY_DOWN ___________________ -Some of the gateways are in the GW_UNAVAILABLE state. If a NVMeoF daemon has crashed, -the daemon log file (found at ``/var/log/ceph/``) may contain troubleshooting information. +Some of the gateways are in the GW_UNAVAILABLE state. If a NVMeoF daemon has +crashed, the daemon log file (found at ``/var/log/ceph/``) may contain +troubleshooting information. Miscellaneous |