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authorJan Engelhardt <jengelh@inai.de>2024-12-25 17:07:17 +0100
committerJan Engelhardt <jengelh@inai.de>2024-12-25 17:24:38 +0100
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man: grammar fixes for introductory adverbs/phrases
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diff --git a/man/kernel-install.xml b/man/kernel-install.xml
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@@ -308,9 +308,9 @@
<para>If set to <option>auto</option> (the default), the
<filename>/etc/kernel/entry-token</filename> (or
<filename>$KERNEL_INSTALL_CONF_ROOT/entry-token</filename>) file will be read if it exists, and the
- stored value used. Otherwise if the local machine ID is initialized it is used. Otherwise
+ stored value used. Otherwise, if the local machine ID is initialized, it is used. Otherwise,
<varname>IMAGE_ID=</varname> from <filename>os-release</filename> will be used, if set. Otherwise,
- <varname>ID=</varname> from <filename>os-release</filename> will be used, if set. Otherwise a
+ <varname>ID=</varname> from <filename>os-release</filename> will be used, if set. Otherwise, a
randomly generated machine ID is used.</para>
<para>Using the machine ID for naming the entries is generally preferable, however there are cases
@@ -429,7 +429,7 @@
<para>Note that while <varname>$KERNEL_INSTALL_ENTRY_TOKEN</varname> and
<varname>$KERNEL_INSTALL_MACHINE_ID</varname> are often set to the same value, the latter is guaranteed
to be a valid 32 character ID in lowercase hexadecimals while the former can be any short string. The
- entry token to use is read from <filename>/etc/kernel/entry-token</filename>, if it exists. Otherwise a
+ entry token to use is read from <filename>/etc/kernel/entry-token</filename>, if it exists. Otherwise, a
few possible candidates below <varname>$BOOT</varname> are checked for Boot Loader Specification Type 1
entry directories, and if found the entry token is derived from that. If that is not successful,
<varname>$KERNEL_INSTALL_MACHINE_ID</varname> is used as fallback.</para>