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author | Jan Engelhardt <jengelh@inai.de> | 2024-12-25 17:07:17 +0100 |
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committer | Jan Engelhardt <jengelh@inai.de> | 2024-12-25 17:24:38 +0100 |
commit | c592ebdf4f88acc378b093a9657e8aa357a380be (patch) | |
tree | 9100a55ff6698f8e00f3745518ad3a1efa93981b /man/kernel-install.xml | |
parent | man: expand word contractions (diff) | |
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man: grammar fixes for introductory adverbs/phrases
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diff --git a/man/kernel-install.xml b/man/kernel-install.xml index 7f57d96839..7c0ef0efc9 100644 --- a/man/kernel-install.xml +++ b/man/kernel-install.xml @@ -308,9 +308,9 @@ <para>If set to <option>auto</option> (the default), the <filename>/etc/kernel/entry-token</filename> (or <filename>$KERNEL_INSTALL_CONF_ROOT/entry-token</filename>) file will be read if it exists, and the - stored value used. Otherwise if the local machine ID is initialized it is used. Otherwise + stored value used. Otherwise, if the local machine ID is initialized, it is used. Otherwise, <varname>IMAGE_ID=</varname> from <filename>os-release</filename> will be used, if set. Otherwise, - <varname>ID=</varname> from <filename>os-release</filename> will be used, if set. Otherwise a + <varname>ID=</varname> from <filename>os-release</filename> will be used, if set. Otherwise, a randomly generated machine ID is used.</para> <para>Using the machine ID for naming the entries is generally preferable, however there are cases @@ -429,7 +429,7 @@ <para>Note that while <varname>$KERNEL_INSTALL_ENTRY_TOKEN</varname> and <varname>$KERNEL_INSTALL_MACHINE_ID</varname> are often set to the same value, the latter is guaranteed to be a valid 32 character ID in lowercase hexadecimals while the former can be any short string. The - entry token to use is read from <filename>/etc/kernel/entry-token</filename>, if it exists. Otherwise a + entry token to use is read from <filename>/etc/kernel/entry-token</filename>, if it exists. Otherwise, a few possible candidates below <varname>$BOOT</varname> are checked for Boot Loader Specification Type 1 entry directories, and if found the entry token is derived from that. If that is not successful, <varname>$KERNEL_INSTALL_MACHINE_ID</varname> is used as fallback.</para> |