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@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ many attempts should be made to boot it. This document describes how systemd
implements this scheme.
The many different components involved in the implementation may be used
-independently and in combination with other software to for example support
+independently and in combination with other software to, for example, support
other boot loaders or take actions outside of the boot loader.
Here's a brief overview of the complete set of components:
@@ -93,10 +93,10 @@ Here's an example walkthrough of how this all fits together.
After the rename completed, the entry is booted as usual.
4. Let's say this attempt to boot fails. On the following boot the boot loader
- will hence see the `+2-1` tag in the name, and hence rename the entry file to
+ will hence see the `+2-1` tag in the name, and will hence rename the entry file to
`4.14.11-300.fc27.x86_64+1-2.conf`, and boot it.
-5. Let's say the boot fails again. On the subsequent boot the loader hence will
+5. Let's say the boot fails again. On the subsequent boot the loader will hence
see the `+1-2` tag, and rename the file to
`4.14.11-300.fc27.x86_64+0-3.conf` and boot it.
@@ -200,7 +200,7 @@ are a couple of recommendations.
Such unit would be typically wanted (or required) by one of the
[`bootup`](https://www.freedesktop.org/software/systemd/man/bootup.html) targets,
- for example `multi-user.target`. To avoid potential loops due to conflicting
+ for example, `multi-user.target`. To avoid potential loops due to conflicting
[default dependencies](https://www.freedesktop.org/software/systemd/man/systemd.unit.html#Default%20Dependencies)
ordering, it is recommended to also add an explicit dependency (e.g.
`After=multi-user.target`) to the unit. This overrides the implicit ordering